Another great essay Amy (age 9) wrote

There is no one else on earth like my brother, Michael. His looks, his actions, and his personality all make him unique. You will never mistake him for another boy.

First of all, no one in the world looks like Michael. From his head to his toes, his unique looks distinctly give him away. His dark, blond, rough hair is always nicely trimmed. His eyebrows are close to his bright blue eyes. A circular, pointy nose is on his face. His cheeks have a few nice freckles, which he hates. This boy has a light pink mouth and a small chin. His neck is slim, and his muscles are big and strong. His legs are very sturdy, and he is proud of that. You will never mistake him for another boy by his looks.

Secondly, there is not another boy that does all the things Michael does. He has many talents. He has a talent for playing instruments. He, surprisingly, plays three: violin, piano, and organ. Some people are talented with musical abilities, like him, but they concentrate so much on instruments, that they do not run very fast at all. Unlike them, he runs very, very, fast and can beat all his friends. For a seven year-old boy, that is amazing. Some may run fast, but not draw very well. He does. He loves to draw lots of things, but most of all, airplanes and airports. His life is crowded with music, running, and drawing.

Lastly, Michael’s personality confirms that no one is like him. He is determined and finishes whatever he starts. He is a strong leader, and hates to be a follower. He also hates to lose, so he always declares loudly that he won. His determination, strong leadership, and drive to win contribute to his personality.

There is no one in the world like my brother, Michael Nelson. His looks, what he does, and his personality show that no one is like him. You will never find anyone like him, unless it is he, himself.